Today, I want to see you write some figurative language (writing that imply’s meaning).
We have learned about metaphors, similes, personification, alliteration, and onomatopoeia. Now I would like to see you apply this in a creative way. For instance, you might want to explain how you are like a rock, flower, old shoe, or something else. Maybe you might want to write some free verse on a topic like rain, storms, winter, summer, colours like Ken Nordine or something else entirely.
Either way, I want to see examples of these types of figurative language! It’s your chance to write without “RULES”. No prose, just poetry!
Also feel free to comment on others and try to identify what type of figurative language they used.
Here is some inspiration from Ken Nordine….
Rain.
Rain is triumphantly,
tapping,
terror,
on top of my tiny house.
I am a hyena.
Constanly a non-stop laughing hyena.
Blue
The color of the sky
Oh blue the color of blueberries
Yum the nice color of a nice lake
I love the color blue.
the color blue is a good thing to use yolanda good job I like it and good words
Blue is my favourite colour!
Mr. Purdon is a king.
King of the classroom.
Lemon
sour sweet
always gives you a sour face
the nice lemon.
🙂
Cats
They are like so
so
so
Cute but,
The only mean thing about them is they scratch your face,
Cats
Um, is that alliteration?
Porky.
Porky is a pig.
Porky is FAT, fabulous, fugly.
Porky is tamed by Steve and Steve is Square and Steve is Steveier than the Steveiest Steves.
Alleration is all I see
Agree!
grey.
The king of miserable drained of happiness people.
Never ever friendly to yellow, the colour of happiness.
But is nice to non other but blue, the colour of sadness,
grey’s only friend.
🙂
Love it! Especially about liking only blue!!!
Thunder
As the thunder booms, and booms, all the animals
Run as fast as they can, to find shelter.
As they run the lightning flashes down,
Down,
Down,
To the ground. Until. BOOM!
The thunder CRASHES and BOOMS!
Then. It all goes silent, the birds start
Singing and all the animals start coming out of
There hiding places.
Thunder.
My dog used to be scared of fireworks, so I don’t think he’d do well with thunder.
Bacon.
Great, Good, Greasy.
Doesn’t leave your stomach mad.
Bacon likes you, if you like him.
Bacon could be eaten at any time of the day.
Bacon wants you to continue eating.
Bacon, brilliant, besties.
Bacon is friends with eggs.
The buzzer DINGS when the bacon is finished.
Bacon, bacon, bacon…
I love bacon!
So do I!
Great, now I’m craving bacon.
Haha i like this 🙂
My best friend is like a turtle always shy and pops out her head out when not alot of people are around
I am like a river because I will not stop moving when I am motivated.
Well done.
I’m a rook because I’m lazy.
Haha! I see personification.
I do too!
Personification? I’m thinking metaphor!
I get mixed up soemtimes…
it is easy to get mixed up!
Purple,
The color of a violet,
Never knew a color,
Can be so beautiful,
Fun, fantastic,
The color of a prom dress,
I love the color purple
Nice!
purple is pretty
Thats good Kendra 🙂 😀 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
I am like a thread,
Thin, lightweight, and not strong.
Thread can be any size, color and shape.
True. Nuff Said. + Metaphor
Thunder
Thunder BOOM,BOOM as animals race to their habitats scared like a baby crying
becaues of thunder
THUNDER 🙂
I am like a Bear because during the Winter i just sleep on and on…
Exactly
My best friend is a tiger. A tough, fast, quiet tiger.
(Although she does laugh a lot for a tiger) 🙂
My best friend is like a wolf ready to rip you apart body part by body.
My teacher is a dolphin, smart, speedy, swift.
My best friend is like a turtle slow, steady, sturdy
Jee Wiz!
I’m like a dog because I am wild
Im like a rock because Im lazy
I’m not im
Dogs
Loud and loving
The bark a lot for attention
Very playful and love to run
Thunder
Thunder is wild
Thunder is always around
There is a man
A cold- blooded man
He’s in the sky
All the way
Up,
Up,
Up,
All the way up like a bird
That man is the Thunder Man
He is not friendly at all
Thunder Man hides in his fear
Makes the little ones sad, scared
That makes him happy
Letting others be in a sad mood
He uses that for his anger,
Thunder
Kapow is the sound when you punch someone pr something.
Buzz is the sound of a bee.
Ding is the sound of a timer.
Roar is the sound of a bear.
Dark cave
The deep deep dark cave
All you can hear is you voice echo bouncing of the cave walls
Feel lonely with no one around just you and your echo’s
Feel a shame for what you did you can only see darkness
Green
The colour of a tree
The colour of grass
A colour of an alligator
Green is all around you.
I am like a Jaguar, smart, sneaky, and swift like a Jaguar.